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बुधवार, 16 जनवरी 2019

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पतंगों भरा खुला आसमान
जैसन खेल का बड़ा मैदान !
नटखट बच्चों-सी सरपट पतंगें
पतंगों से ऊँची उनकी उमंगें !

काली पतंग आगे बढ़ी
पीली झटपट लड़ मरी !
सतरंगी बड़ी नकचढ़ी
तिरंगी उस पर हँस पड़ी !

बैंगनी इठला के उड़ी
भूरी को महँगी पड़ी !
गुलाबी ने पींग भरी
चितकबरी झूल गयी !

दूधिया सरपट दौड़ी
लहरिया लो पिछड़ गई !
नारंगी तो मचल गई
आसमानी झूम चली !

पतंगों की देख अठखेली
सूरज को सूझी ठिठोली,
धूप की दे थपकी गुनगुनी
ठंडी तेज़ हवा चला दी !

पतंगों भरा खुला आसमान
जैसन खेल का बड़ा मैदान !
नटखट बच्चों-सी सरपट पतंगें
पतंगों से ऊँची उनकी उमंगें !

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  1. उत्तर
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